Critique of 3 previous pieces

Critique of 3 previous pieces

Distortion of Water, Oil and Light
This photographic set looks at the idea of distortion, specifically through the use of water, oil and light and the ways in which the three can be combined. Whilst I think that the photo’s look well organised in a grid created in InDesign and well photographed, I feel that more thought could have gone into making sure the margins were evenly spaced- particularly the gap down the centre and the border around the edge. Also I feel that the distribution of the colour images needs work, so that it doesn’t just look like a random selection of images.

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About aayusha

A first year Graphic Design student currently studying at The Arts University Bournemouth. Simply just want to showcase my academic and personal work as well as things that I find inspiring/ influential!

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